Upon this glory moulded gilded gold and morning
Fell obscure to seams behold, the flutter-blood of earth upturned
The yellow folds, twas kingdom sworn – finer picking, pluck it yearned,
Dawned, upon what love to tell, the finer song in lovage yawning,
I swore, by song in swelled out throttle chords, to mouth, oh spring! –
Under thimbled tips your swift unsingly, your greener, large rudder wings
The palest gourd: as fend-off-falcon-gentle swings sweet to the little things,
blow, and wind be fearless upon thy single shin:
You turn, a sibyl songstress the amberest pluck, nihtegales’ wold,
And be not a tempered thing, shadowed over gleaming sight
Beauty in the marksman gully thy paints upon mine height,
The slender, supple, oh, wonder flutter of a neck in reddish gold –
Majesty of one that does not contend, nor bend the will of vixens’ den,
A prairie-borne of one who knowest the better sough
Unknown to thee bee-catcher wings form finger grins below the bough –
Thy comrade nature, be a beating plume, an eye for eye o’er gloaming glen.
© Eve Redwater 2012
[I've written this for DVersepoets Form for All, where we've been tasked of writing in the style of Gerard Manley Hopkins and his beautiful "sprung rhythm" poetry. I wanted to capture the flight of a Mandarin duck over a field with this poem. I'm a big fan of Hopkins, so this was a joy to write!]





























