It reminds me of a summer day in June.
Cats caterwauling, one ginger-striped alighting a rooftop
walking the spine I thought far too high.
The bees, hungry for the watermelon, swarm the flesh-bit pairing knife.
Mother swats them away with a wooden spatula as we giggle behind
sticky gun-shot fingers.
Dogs in the yard play finicky with their shadows.
The son next door swaddled in a rough pink towel after the water fight.
That time that we both posed for a photograph,
balloons in each hand.
When a bird flew in through the French doors, quick to recognise its mistake;
like a businessman caught in a lift in the depths of winter,
I’ve never seen a decision to leave made that quick.
The biggest dragonfly we’d ever seen;
we screamed together, swatting with a newspaper, magazines,
and sweating hands,
then fell laughing on all fours after it was gone.
© Eve Redwater 2012
haha where do you get your inspirations? Are these things that happen to you? This one made me smile.
A lush stream of memory painted for me to read and it brings to the fore my own laughing days as a child and my own experiences of things that leave quickly out of a mistake realized…lovely.
Hello Anna, thank you for visiting and commenting! I really appreciate it. 🙂 It always fascinates me about the things people feel and think of as they read some of my poems, it’s wonderfully intriguing!
Yes they are! Just a few memories from my childhood here. 🙂
Wonderful way of telling memories. 🙂
Many thanks Francis! 😀
Happy, nostalgic reflections…
Very much so. 😀
Captured in classic detail. Thanks Eve! Always experience great quality in your work. Keep writing!
Very kind of you to say so, thank you! I’ll keep doing my best!
Lovely nostalgic atmosphere very sharp and vivid – I love this
Christine
Thank you Christine! Always a pleasure to hear your thoughts on my work. 🙂 x
Lovely and evocative – I figured these must be memories of childhood.
Thank you David. 🙂 Yes, they are. The last one with the dragonfly is one I often remember with a big smile on my face – it was scary and hilarious all in one!
Wonderful visual and auditory scene, for a moment took me straight into summer.
That’s wonderful to hear! I’m glad this poem took you somewhere nice. 🙂 Thank you~
Ah childhood memories are always so delightful to revisit – and you do so beautifully! Thank you!
Thank you Laurel, these are some of the best that stick in my mind. 🙂
Also, I replied to your last email a few days back, did you receive it?
I love the way you share your memory so generously–so momentarily and vividly illustrated,engaging all the senses and showing such a musical mastery of words!
Thank you very much Bardess! 🙂 Your words really made me smile this evening! Glad to have you visit~
What a pleasant snap-shot of time.
Hi Joseph! Thank you for stopping by and reading!
Ray Bradbury’s, Dandelion Wine, quickly comes to memory–yearning for summer days. You are masterful with the senses. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks so much Matthew!
I could swear the temperature went up five degrees in just the time it took to read this one!
Hehe, oh my! Thank you~
Lovely Eve
DarkJade-
Thank you DarkJade! 🙂
Fantastic imagery, poignant nostalgia.
Thanks so much! 😀 x